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thanks Damien,
My influence of Miyazaki, it was shown visually with the presence of the loups (emissaries of the forest spirit like in Mononoke).
About the story, I tryed to create characters without a real distinction between good and evil (the shintoism in Myazaki stories)
Each character have a reason for his actions (will be more clear in the second and third tomes).
Normally, in europeans fantasy stories, the distinction between good and evil is much clear (like the lord of the rings).
It is the deep difference in culture and life philosophy between Europe and Asia.
politeism-reincarnation
catholic-heaven and hell
Whoaa, is difficult for me too use english!
Sorry for my grammar mistakes.
about (p46) you have right, I forced it.
but the look of Raido is changed, some days can be passed.
It could be constructed new scabbards.
I hope that this don't remove the sense of the history.
about (p35)
is clear that Fudo is a envies bastard,
I'm sorry but you will have to wait for the third tome to understand as the things have really gone.
In any case you are like sherlock Holmes!
